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Submitted: February 11, 2008
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EDIT: Deleted the text. I got a great grade on it because my teacher didn't care about it, therefore, NEITHER DO I!

Graphic Design is for smart pplz. D:
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I really love the colours! The wings are gorgeous too.

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Thank you. :O The colors are my favorite part.

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They're gorgeous colours!

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I can help you with type since I am in the design track and my illustrations are designed with type in mind.

Also Yes your type doesnt work with this. At all.

You could have organized the information better and on differnt planes.

Also, you poster design isnt giving me enough visual information and is getting alittle boring with just the emphasis on aestic of the figure which is kinda what Brian Ewing [link] does and 7 out of 10 of his compositions don't work at all and bore the shit out of me just showing his good drawing skills.

Bjork's music is crazy and so is she. The poster should reflect that.

Here are some good examples of work that can show you what a good show poster looks like....

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Also you can draw inspiration from things that arent show posters like old illustration, propaganda posters, art neuvo, Film Neiro, 1920 advertisement illustration, ect.

I hope I helped some.

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Holy shit Fish I fucking HAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE type. I just don't know what in the hell to do with it in the end, and it drives me INSANE. I'd love to take some sort of class for type but I just hate it so much. Thanks for all the info, there's not much I can do before the class tomorrow, but I'll work on it. A bit. I'm feeling ok with the image, since I like her more peaceful music than her insane crazy shit, but ARGH THE FUCKING TYPE SUCKS. I need type help 101, but most teachers in our school are completely retarded and lack knowledge of any sort when it comes to fucking computers. But yes, thanks for the links and info.

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This book helped me out alot.

[link]=pd_bbs_sr_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1202791839&sr=1-1

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I love the color scheme for this one :heart:
soft and nice *___*)))

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*bijarr: curving over two guys doing it
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i would give critique but someone above me did a good job adressing the only big problem, the text...other than that this poster doesnt look boring to me tho...its soft and smooth and quiet like a bjork type thing...in a way

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I like!

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